Final double page spread draft

Contents page teacher feedback

This is the feedback my teacher gave me for my contents page. I am going to add a caption to the photo of my artist and add summaries of the articles I have advertised on the right hand list of contents, I will also change the colour scheme a little to break down the grey and black colours of my contents and see what colours work well and make the page more appealing.

Peer feedback - Luke

I like the layout of your contents page as it looks very professional. I also like the contents of your articles.
The font isn't as formal as it could be, it may be seen as 'cartoony' x

Feedback

Really good contents page, colourful and looks very professionally made - Danny

Peer Feedback

The strengths of your contents page are the text as it is bright, looks professional and stands out, the pictures are good and look like they could feature in a real magazine. I like the colour scheme too!
I think that to improve you would maybe change the photographs around so the artist on the cover is the larger of the two images.

Amelia R

Double page spread draft 2

Double page spread draft 1